1、 Two months ago Gullotta saw a 50-year-old man who had delayed doing anything about his smoker s cough for a year.

　　主干：Gullotta saw a man...

　　1. who 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾a...man。

　　2.本句是肯定陳述句，卻用了doing anything而不是doing something,語(yǔ)義上有所強(qiáng)調(diào)。

　　譯文：兩個(gè)月以前格洛塔為一位50歲的男士看病，這名男士吸煙可歐已有一年，但期間他沒(méi)有采取任何措施，以至于延誤了治療。

　　2、The digital bread crumbs you leave everywhere make it easy for strangers to reconstruct who you are, where you are and what you like.

　　主干：The crumbs make it easy to reconstruce...

　　you leave everywhere 是定語(yǔ)從句，省略了關(guān)系代詞that，修飾crumbs; make it easy for...to do...結(jié)構(gòu)中，it 是形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是不定式 to reconstruct...。easy是賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，for引導(dǎo)出不定式的邏輯主語(yǔ)strangers。句末who, where和what引導(dǎo)的三個(gè)名詞性從句都是reconstruct的賓語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：你處處留下的數(shù)字面包碎屑很容易讓陌生人推想出你是誰(shuí)，你在哪里，你對(duì)什么感興趣。

　　3、Privacy economist Alessandro Acquisti has run a series of tests that reveal people will surrender personal information like Social Security numbers just to get their hands on a pitiful 50-cents-off coupon .

　　主干：Alessandro Acquisti has run a series of tests...

　　Privacy economist 和 Alessandro Acquisti 是同位語(yǔ)。tests后的that從句作tests的定語(yǔ)，該從句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞reveal帶有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句people will surrender...。

　　譯文：隱私經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家Alessandro Acquisti 進(jìn)行了一系列的測(cè)試，這些測(cè)試表明人們會(huì)透露像社保卡號(hào)這樣的個(gè)人信息，就只是為了能拿到微不足道的便宜50美分的優(yōu)惠券。

　　4.There was a time in my life when people asked constantly for stories about what it s like to work in a field dominated by men.

　　主干：There was a time

　　本句是個(gè)存在句，主語(yǔ)a time由when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾。about+what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句構(gòu)成介詞短語(yǔ)，作stories的后置定語(yǔ)在該賓語(yǔ)從句中，it是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的不定式短語(yǔ)to work...是真正的主語(yǔ)。dominated...作a field的后置定語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：我生活中有那么一段時(shí)間人們老是問(wèn)我，供職于一個(gè)男性占主導(dǎo)地位的領(lǐng)域感覺(jué)如何。

　　5.The practice that can help you past your learned bad habits of trying to edit as you write is what Elbow calls free writing.

　　主干：The practice...is what...

　　定語(yǔ)從句that can...修飾主語(yǔ)The practice,從句中的介詞短語(yǔ) past your...habits作賓語(yǔ)you的補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，as you write引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句修飾trying to edite。what引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句中用了call+賓語(yǔ)+補(bǔ)語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)，what是賓語(yǔ)，free writing是補(bǔ)語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：這種可以幫助你克服在寫(xiě)作的同時(shí)就試圖編輯的壞習(xí)慣的做法便是Elbow所稱(chēng)作的自由式寫(xiě)作。

　　1、 Two months ago Gullotta saw a 50-year-old man who had delayed doing anything about his smoker s cough for a year.

　　主干：Gullotta saw a man...

　　1. who 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾a...man。

　　2.本句是肯定陳述句，卻用了doing anything而不是doing something,語(yǔ)義上有所強(qiáng)調(diào)。

　　譯文：兩個(gè)月以前格洛塔為一位50歲的男士看病，這名男士吸煙可歐已有一年，但期間他沒(méi)有采取任何措施，以至于延誤了治療。

　　2、The digital bread crumbs you leave everywhere make it easy for strangers to reconstruct who you are, where you are and what you like.

　　主干：The crumbs make it easy to reconstruce...

　　you leave everywhere 是定語(yǔ)從句，省略了關(guān)系代詞that，修飾crumbs; make it easy for...to do...結(jié)構(gòu)中，it 是形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)是不定式 to reconstruct...。easy是賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，for引導(dǎo)出不定式的邏輯主語(yǔ)strangers。句末who, where和what引導(dǎo)的三個(gè)名詞性從句都是reconstruct的賓語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：你處處留下的數(shù)字面包碎屑很容易讓陌生人推想出你是誰(shuí)，你在哪里，你對(duì)什么感興趣。

　　3、Privacy economist Alessandro Acquisti has run a series of tests that reveal people will surrender personal information like Social Security numbers just to get their hands on a pitiful 50-cents-off coupon .

　　主干：Alessandro Acquisti has run a series of tests...

　　Privacy economist 和 Alessandro Acquisti 是同位語(yǔ)。tests后的that從句作tests的定語(yǔ)，該從句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞reveal帶有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句people will surrender...。

　　譯文：隱私經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家Alessandro Acquisti 進(jìn)行了一系列的測(cè)試，這些測(cè)試表明人們會(huì)透露像社保卡號(hào)這樣的個(gè)人信息，就只是為了能拿到微不足道的便宜50美分的優(yōu)惠券。

　　4.There was a time in my life when people asked constantly for stories about what it s like to work in a field dominated by men.

　　主干：There was a time

　　本句是個(gè)存在句，主語(yǔ)a time由when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾。about+what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句構(gòu)成介詞短語(yǔ)，作stories的后置定語(yǔ)在該賓語(yǔ)從句中，it是形式主語(yǔ)，后面的不定式短語(yǔ)to work...是真正的主語(yǔ)。dominated...作a field的后置定語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：我生活中有那么一段時(shí)間人們老是問(wèn)我，供職于一個(gè)男性占主導(dǎo)地位的領(lǐng)域感覺(jué)如何。

　　5.The practice that can help you past your learned bad habits of trying to edit as you write is what Elbow calls free writing.

　　主干：The practice...is what...

　　定語(yǔ)從句that can...修飾主語(yǔ)The practice,從句中的介詞短語(yǔ) past your...habits作賓語(yǔ)you的補(bǔ)語(yǔ)，as you write引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句修飾trying to edite。what引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句中用了call+賓語(yǔ)+補(bǔ)語(yǔ)的結(jié)構(gòu)，what是賓語(yǔ)，free writing是補(bǔ)語(yǔ)。

　　譯文：這種可以幫助你克服在寫(xiě)作的同時(shí)就試圖編輯的壞習(xí)慣的做法便是Elbow所稱(chēng)作的自由式寫(xiě)作。